First of all thanks for the information. You invested your time in studying & articulating such geographical information. This will help us in planning treks and expeditions in these ranges, which will help HP adventure tourism to grow even larger.
One jot I did not find in the list is Kalihani Jot/Pass (Kullu-Bara Bhangal). I request you to add the same to the list.
Also if you provide further information about the passes in extra columns like starting and ending points (villages, nearest town/city) along with map integration that will be very helpful. I will be highly obliged.

In some cases, I could also help (informationally/technically) you, in case you require any assistance.

Regards,
Soumitra Ghosh
soumitra_ghosh_it@yahoo.co.in